Sunday, 10 April 2016

Paragraph Problem Writing Activity


insert the paragraphs in the passage below.

There was once a velveteen rabbit and in the beginning he was really splendid. He was fat and bunchy as a rabbit should be; his coat was spotted brown and white he had real thread whiskers and his ears were lined with pink sateen.


On Christmas morning when he sat wedged in the top of the Boy's stocking with a sprig of holly between his paws the effect was charming. There were other things in the stocking nuts and oranges and a toy engine and chocolate almonds and a clockwork mouse but the Rabbit was quite the best of all.


For at least two hours the Boy loved him and then Aunts and Uncles came to dinner and there was a great rustling of tissue paper and unwrapping of parcels and in the excitement of looking at all the new presents the Velveteen Rabbit was forgotten. 


For a long time he lived in the toy cupboard or on the nursery floor and no one thought very much about him. He was naturally shy and being only made of velveteen some of the more expensive toys quite snubbed him. The mechanical toys were very superior and looked down upon everyone else; they were full of modern ideas and pretended they were real.

Monday, 4 April 2016

scared moment in time

The crickets creaking it was creepy.The darkness was like I was in a dark cabinet.The door of my room was open.I was scared.I was freaked out because I could hear childish music.It was like Voldemort was going to come to my room.The childish music was on because my dad was listening to it and he fell asleep.I saw a arm it could've been Voldemort but it was my mum.